The Impact of Nature, Timing, and Delivery of Feedback on the Learning, Engagement, and Writing Performance of Grade 9 English Students

What if students receive feedback regularly—but still struggle to improve their learning?

This action research explored whether structured, timely feedback could enhance students’ engagement, understanding, and academic performance, rather than serving only as a final judgement.

PROBLEM IN
CONTEXT

What the Data Revealed

At Beaconhouse Liberty Campus, Grade 9 English 1123 students were expected to write with clear ideas, logical structure, and accurate language use, but the baseline (pre-test) writing task revealed a clear gap. Formative feedback practices were often minimal and inconsistent, meaning students were not getting timely, actionable guidance to improve their writing beyond grades and brief remarks.

Why it Mattered

This gap directly affected students’ ability to revise meaningfully across key writing areas—content & organisation, grammar & sentence structure, vocabulary, and mechanics—which were assessed through a consistent rubric. Over the four-week intervention, post-test results showed clear improvement across all four domains, with an average gain of 9–10 marks per student, making structured feedback a priority for improving writing performance and engagement.

This challenge raised an important question for the teaching team: if students know what good writing looks like, why do they still struggle to improve after receiving feedback? To explore this gap systematically, the study used action research to examine whether timely, structured feedback—delivered through verbal guidance, written comments, peer review, and 1:1 conferencing—could strengthen students’ writing performance and engagement over a four-week cycle.

A performance target was established — students would demonstrate measurable improvement across the four rubric domains, with visible gains in overall scores from pre-test to post-test — reinforcing that feedback should move beyond correction and become a tool for progress, confidence, and revision-based learning.

Research Question

How does the nature, timing, and delivery of feedback impact learning, engagement, and academic performance in Grade 9 English students?

Objective 01

Feedback Types & Writing Performance

To explore how different feedback types and delivery methods influence student writing performance.

Objective 03

Peer & Teacher Feedback

To assess the role of peer and teacher feedback in enhancing student engagement.

Objective 02

Immediate vs Delayed Feedback

To analyze whether immediate or delayed feedback better supports specific writing skills.

Objective 04

Technology-Assisted Feedback

To determine the effectiveness of technology-assisted feedback in improving feedback accessibility.

INTERVENTION TIMELINE AND ACTIVITIES

August (Baseline Phase)

  • Conducted baseline analytical worksheets to identify gaps in reasoning

  • Diagnosed weak areas like patterns, word problems, and “explain your thinking” tasks

  • Collected initial data for 54 students

September onwards (Implementation Phase – Daily Routine Starts)

  • Introduced daily rigorous maths practice focused on thinking habits

  • Embedded short reasoning tasks into everyday lessons

  • Started consistent mental maths drills + multiplication tables (2–9) practice

Throughout the Cycle (Active Learning + Engagement)

Students practiced analytical thinking through:

  • Puzzles and interactive maths games

  • Hands-on challenges using counters and tangrams

  • Real-life problem contexts (money, grouping/sharing, number-building tasks)

Ongoing Monitoring & Assessment Tracking

  • Redesigned CATs to include a separate analytical skills component

  • Monitored progress through:

    • Regular formative worksheets

    • CAT comparisons

    • Tracking on Google Sheets + teacher observation notes

End of Cycle (Outcome Check)

  • Compared results against SIP targets

  • Recorded improvements in analytical performance and overall B-Meta outcomes

FINDINGS AND IMPLICATIONS

SIP Target Achieved (and exceeded)

By the end of the intervention, 85% of Grade 2 students scored above 70% in the analytical component—surpassing the SIP goal of 80%.

Major Improvement in B-Meta Performance

The Grade 2 Maths B-Meta average rose to 80.67% in 2024, showing a strong improvement compared to the previous year’s results.

Stronger Analytical Thinking and Reasoning Skills

Students showed visible growth in handling patterns, word problems, and “explain your thinking” questions, moving away from guesswork toward clearer reasoning.

More Engagement and Confidence in Problem-Solving

Daily routines, hands-on tools, and motivation strategies helped students become more confident, consistent, and willing to attempt challenging maths tasks—not just fast at calculations.

If you’re interested to learn more about the intervention, methodology, resources or the results, click on the relevant button below to access the full research report.

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Here’s the report podcast if you’re interested.

Tooba Rahim Saqib

Teacher

Tooba is a teacher of Grade 9 and 10 English (Cambridge 1123), dedicated to developing students’ critical thinking and effective writing skills. Conducting action research on feedback significantly reshaped her teaching philosophy and strengthened her reflective practice. She observed measurable growth in student performance and confidence, reinforcing her commitment to research-informed and impactful teaching.